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2023年2月14日发(作者:河南都市频道在线直播)GRE满分范文(二)
GRE满分范文(二)
题目:
Inanyfieldofendeavor,itisimpossibletomakeasignificant
contributionwithoutfirstbeingstronglyinfluencedbypast
achievementswithinthatfield.
题目解析:
本题在题型分类上属于条件类问题中的必要条件题,题目涉及领
域比较抽象,可以用分类讨论法自行选择领域分析作答。对于前人成
就对未来研究的促进作用,作者持复合观点,认为在不同领域中该作
用具备不同权重。范文开篇首先肯定前人成就的积极作用,在正文中
分音乐与文学两个领域讨论了前人影响的必要性与局限性,进而在第
三主体段进行发散,提出除纵向学习外横向的跨领域学习同样重要。
范文:
Noonewilldenythatastudyofanyfield,beforestretching
itsownlimbs,willgainbenefitsifitstartswithathorough
awarenessofalltheformerendeavorsandtheirachievements.
Tomakeitclear,soakinginbygonesismuchliketracingback
alongthepavedroadandtryingtoclarifyhowtheforerunners
efiting
mechanismismorethanimplicit:ononehand,theapproaches
utilizedintheforegoneendeavorareprovedtobevalidbyall
theeffectsachievedandthuscouldbegenerallyused;onthe
otherhand,anybygoneendeavor,nomatterwhatkindofgoals
itmayhaverealized,isatrialconsistingofassumptionand
validation,thuscontributestonotonlyconfirmingtheprecious,
ngforthese,amore
considering-worthissue,insteadofquestioningthesurebenefit
ofpastachievement,isthatwhetheritisamusttobeexposed
tobygoneinfluencesbeforelaunchingoutcertainendeavors,
to
thisquestioncanneverbeasserted,sinceindifferentfields
bygonescarrydifferentweightsandthusshouldbeattached
withdifferentpriorities.
Itisunbelievablethatinthefieldofmusic,whichmayfavor
originalitymorethananyotherfielddo,peoplearecontinuously
shadowedbutinspiredbywhatthe
arena,thepast
achievement,byitself,makesnotonlyareferabletextbookbut
re
significantroleisrealizedthroughoneofthemostfrequently
usedmethodofproducingmusic—ngaportion
ofonesoundrecordingandreusingitasaninstrumentina
differentpiece,hiphopmusiciansareenabledtomixout
miraculouspieceswhichmayevenoutweightheoriginalversion.
Althoughcriticsandargumentscenteringoncopyrightshave
neverceased,thematerial-orientedwayofproducingmusichas
provedtobenolackofcreativityandachievedhugecommercial
kindofmusicprocessing,alterationsofthe
music’stone,pitch,mode,ortempo,allwilladdtothemagicof
turninggoodintobest,butnoneofthesemiracleswillberealized
unlessthemusicianscouldhaveagreatmasteryofthe“good”,
/sheshouldbeequippedwithabunchoftheoldrecords
andarefullyawareofthebeautyofeverysinglenotewithinit,
ingthatHiphop
musicianKurtisBlowhasstartedthescrollofsamplingwithhis
renownedhitIfIRuledtheWorld,itishardtoimaginewhatthe
hiphopworldwouldbelikeifallthecomposersweredeprived
oftheoldknowledgetheyacquirefrompioneers.
Nevertheless,intermofliterature,anotherfieldwhichalso
featurestheutilizationofcreativity,formerachievementsmay
poseasanimpedimenttoovercomeratherthananynurturing
asbeenadiscussionaroundthe
disparitiesamongseveralgrandnamesofshortfictionwriting,
Caver,eehavebeendivinedasthe
“Chekhov”r,thatglowingpraise
hasanotherwayofinterpretation,whichmayrevealsomedark
sideoftheinfluenceofourancestors:Chekhovhasstoodasthe
MountEverestintheworldofshortstoriesandsincehistime,all
theeffortsdevotedtoshortfictionwritingresembleclimbingthe
mount—nomatterhowhardhetried,Caverwasonly
approachingthepeakfromthesouthernside,whileMunrofrom
slikeChekhovhassettheenvelopof
allthefutureactivitiesandthenewcomershavenochanceof
Yanwon
the2012NobelPrizeinLiterature,hewasquestionedforthe
triedtotracewhen
eachofhisworkswascreatedandifhehadreadMárquez’s
storiesatthetimeofwriting,inordertodetectanypossible
geratesayinghas
itthatMárquezhasdepletedeverysingleartistryofwriting
r,evenadmittingthereissometruthinit,isit
impossibleforanotherbrainofotherplacesandtimestocreate
newpieces,atleastofsimilargreatness,withoutbeinginfluenced
bytheformerones?Inotherwords,canoriginalityberepeated,
butnotcopied?Inthisscenario,overstressontheformer
achievementwillnodoubtdampenthecreativitysprungfrom
independentthinking.
Andmoreover,learningshouldneveronlytakeplace
betweendifferenttimespots,butacrossvariousfieldsofthe
ieldofjournalism,where
professionalismfavorsinstantreactsratherthanlong-run
reference,formerachievementmaynotplaysuchasignificant
d,amulti-background
ghajournalist
whoownsahistoricalviewwillsurelybenefitfromtheformer’s
experience,consideringthattheworldismergingintoonehuge
entityandthatoneman’senergyisinevitablysubjectto
limitedness,itisofmorepracticalusetobefamiliarwith
economics,politicsandothersubjectsofpoliticalorsocial
sciencetoproduceaqualifiedreport.
Beforereachingtheconclusionofthenecessityofreferingto
thepast,ted
outintheintroduction,pastachievementsmajorlyshowtheir
effectsintwoways,handingdownartistryandeliminating
r,isthepastartistryalwaysinneed
forthecontemporaryefforts?Isitpossiblethatitmayserveasa
confinementinsteadofexcitement,deviationinsteadof
inspiration?Moreover,isitpossiblethatsomealternatives
excludedbyforerunnersturnouttobevalidduetotherecent
theoreticalorpracticaladvancementinthatfield?Alltheabove
possibilitieshavebeenconfirmedoreliminatedindifferent
circumstances,whichillustratesthatwhetheritisanecessary
conditiontolearntheforegoneknowledgewhenseekingforany
fieldachievementisdefinitelyanopenquestion.