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人教版（2019）高中英语必修一话题作文与范文
【 作文一】话题：自我介绍（Welcome Unit）
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求提名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是李华，16岁，晨光中学高一学生，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。
1. 爱好音乐、摄影，善于与人交流。
2. 乐于助人，热爱自然，热爱和平。
3. 参加夏令营的目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化(foreign cultures)。
参考词汇：和平友谊夏令营Peace and Friendship Summer Camp
要求：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文；
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a student studying in Chenguang Senior High School. Learning
that the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp to be held by International Culture
Communication Centre is approaching, I'm writing to apply for it.
First and foremost, I have great passion for music and photography, and I always
enjoy music in my spare time. Besides, as a kind person who loves nature and peace, I
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am confident that I can promote a better communication with others. Last but not
least, not only can I make more friends, but also I can learn more about foreign
cultures.
Should this application meet with your favorable consideration, I will do my
utmost to justify the confidence you repose in me.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【 作文二】话题：校园生活（Unit1 Teenage Life）
假定你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Miss Worried的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：本学期期末考试后经常感到压力大晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容包括：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议并说明理由（至少两条建议）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头与结尾已为你写好。
Dear Miss Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty falling asleep.
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Dear Miss Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty falling asleep. The truth is that
everyone will face great pressure when entering high school, so you don’t have to
worry so much. Here are three tips.
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of sharing
your feelings and getting support. Second, go outdoors and play team games with
your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. And third,
work out a schedule and follow it. This way, you can make good use of your time.
I hope you’ll find them useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【 作文三】话题：校园生活（Unit1 Teenage Life）
假设你是Amy，你的朋友Jack给你写信倾诉了自己的烦恼。请根据以下提供的内容，用英语写一封回信，并给他一些建议。
Jack的烦恼 1.数学和语文学得很好，英语比较难，学习压力大；
2.父母不理解，觉得他应该是班上最好的；
3.现在对学习不感兴趣。
你的建议
……(至少二条)
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注意：1. 词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不要逐字翻译，要点可适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear about your problems. You mention that you do well in Maths
and Chinese, but find English difficult to learn. Besides, you are under great pressure
because your parents don’t understand you and insist that you should be the top
student. As a result, you often have arguments so that you lose interest in study.
As to the problems mentioned above, I have some suggestions for you. First of all,
instead of arguing with your parents, you should try to communicate with your
parents about your troubles and show respect for them. After all, they are the ones
who care about you most. Besides, you can turn to teachers for advice and make a
plan on how to improve English. Most importantly, you need to cheer up and make
up your mind to learn English well.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help to you.
Yours，
Amy
【 作文四】话题：旅行（Unit2 Travelling Around）
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假设你是刘明，寒假期间准备去北京旅游。请你根据下面的提示，用英语给你的网友李红写一封邮件。主要内容如下：
1. 你以前从未去过北京，请他当向导，带你参观长城，颐和园和其它名胜；
2. 想住在他家里，以便聊聊彼此的生活和学习；
3. 问候他的父母。
注意：
1. 词数 100左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数
2. 颐和园 the Summer Palace
Dear Li Hong,
I haven’t heard from you for quite a long time. How have you been these days?
During the coming winter vacation, I’m going to Beijing for a tour. As I have
never been to Beijing before, I’d like you to be my guide. I hope you can show me
around the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and some other places of interest. What’s more, during my visit I hope to stay together with you in your house so that we can
have a good talk about our life and studies. What do you think of my idea? I would
like to know your opinion.
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Please give my best regards（问候） to your parents.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Ming
【作文五】话题：体育运动（Unit3 Sports and fitness）
假如你是李华，学校英语角以My favorite sport 为题开展征文。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿。
1.介绍一下你喜欢的运动项目以及你是如何喜欢上这项运动的；
2.你最喜欢的运动员是谁；
3.你是怎样提高这项运动的技巧的。
My favorite sport
Of all the sports, I like table tennis best. I became interested in it when I was very
young.
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I'm fond of Chinese Team players, such as Wang Nan, Zhang Yining, Ma Lin,
Wang Hao, and so on. I think it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game
that needs strength and skill. The reason why I like it very much is that it is our
national sport as well as of great benefit to us. Playing table tennis can build up our
bodies, keep us healthy and train our brains. What's more, it can help us to learn to
cooperate(合作) with each other. In a word, I like it very much. Though I can't play it
well, I still try my best to practice it.
In my spare time, I often play table tennis with my classmates to improve my skills.
And I often watch table tennis programs on TV, I believe I will be an outstanding
player in the near future.
【作文六】话题：体育运动（Unit3 Sports and fitness）
假定你是李华，你的美国网友Harry发邮件询问你最喜欢的运动，请你根据以下所给提示，向他介绍你最喜欢的运动——游泳。
1. 何时开始喜欢上游泳 2. 现在练习游泳的情况 3. 你的理想
词数100左右。
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Dear Harry,
Nice to receive your letter. I’d like to tell you about my favourite sport,
swimming.
At the age of six, I began to learn swimming from my parents, who are good at（擅长） it. Now I often go swimming with my friends in my spare time（在空闲时）.
Besides, I go to sports school every weekend, where I have learned many swimming
skills. Swimming does good to my health（对健康有好处）, and I have made many
friends as well（也）. My favourite swimmer is Ye Shiwen, who won two gold medals at
the 2012 London Olympic Games at the age of 16. I hope I can swim as well as her
and have the opportunity to（有机会做某事） take part in （参加）the Olympic Games
in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【 作文七】话题：自然灾害（Unit4 Natural Disasters）
假设你是来自美国的汤姆，你从电视新闻上得知你朋友王林所在的城市发生了地震。请你给王林写一封信，内容包括：
1.询问王林及其家人是否安好；
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2.得知该地震的影响：6人死亡，500多人受伤，20人失踪，200多所房子坍塌；
3.愿意尽最大努力提供帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Lin，
How are you doing？When I watched the news on TV, I learned that a terrible
earthquake happened in your city. I was really concerned about you and your family.
I’m so sorry to hear about the disaster. It caused six deaths and left more than
five hundred persons injured. What’s worse，20 persons were missing and over two
hundred houses fell down. I hope that none of your family members was injured.
Please don’t be worried. Everything will be fine. If you need any help，please let
me know. As one of your best friends，I will do what I can to help you.
Yours sincerely，
Tom
【 作文八】话题：英语（Unit5 languages around the world）
假设你是李华 , 你所在学校拟在下周开一个 " 如何高效地学习英语 " 的讲座。请你根据以下要点给史密斯教授写一封信 , 邀请他给学生做这次讲座。
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信的内容包括 :
讲座目的 : 让学生了解英语学习策略
讲座内容 : 如何高效学习英语 , 如何提高学习英语的兴趣 , 如何自主学习
讲座时间 : 1 小时 30 分钟左右。
参考词汇 : 策略 strategy
Dear Professor Smith,
Our school is planning to have a lecture on how to learn English effectively for
middle school students next week and I'm writing to ask you to come and give a talk
on English learning strategies. It will help us understand how to learn English in
effective ways and also increase our interest in learning it, thus making us learn it
actively. Do you think one and a half hours will be enough for such a lecture?
Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements.
Looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【 作文九】话题：英语（Unit5 languages around the world）
写一篇题为 How I Overcome Difficulties in Learning English 的英语短文。写作任务：你是怎样克服困难学好英语的？①你在英语学习中有哪些困难？ ②你是如何克服这些困难的？
审题构思 注意以下几点：
1. 存在的困难。在短文的第一段就应该写出“我”在英语学习中存在的问题，比如受家乡话发音的影响,/r/音和/l/音不分；记忆力差，很难扩大词汇量；阅读速度慢，不能在规定的时间内把试题做完等。
2. 采取的措施。在第二段中，要简单说明“我”是如何克服这些困难的。如通过勤学苦练，尝试其它不同的学习方法，或者向老师、同学等寻求帮助等等。
3. 说明的方法。我们可运用举例说明法，把学习中的困难和解决的办法列出来。
4. 心得与体会。唐僧师徒四人历尽磨难终于取得真经，那么当你成功地克服了英语学习中的困难后，必定也会充满成就感，总结出心得体会。何不简要点出来与各位朋友分享呢？
I had many difficulties when I started to learn English. Since I come from
Chaoshan District, I could not tell / r / from / l /. Because they sound exactly the same
in my dialect, I had great difficulty in telling “right” from “light”. My poor memory
was another challenge for me when I decided to enlarge my vocabulary. I could only
remember the English words for a while.
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In order to tell the slight difference between / r / and / l /, I forced myself to
practice a lot every day. Whenever I started to speak English, I reminded myself of the
difference between “right” and “light” as well as “read” and “lead”. At first
I felt it rather unnatural, but soon I got used to speaking in this way. As for my poor
memory, I gave up mechanical memorization and tried many other ways. Finally I
found a most efficient way for me: memorizing English words by their syllables and
pronunciation.
This is how I succeeded in overcoming the difficulties in learning English and now
I have a stronger belief in the proverb that where there is a will, there is a way.
【 作文十】话题：英语（Unit5 languages around the world）
假定你是一名高中生，一次一位外国朋友问你，除了在学校学习英语之外还有什么其它途径练习英语。请你根据提示用英语(词数: 100左右)写出你参加“英语角” 的情况。
提示：1. 英语角” 于两年前成立，许多中学生参加，有时也有些大学生和外国友人来此。
2. 活动时间：每周六上午。
3. 活动内容：练习英语口语，谈论大家共同感兴趣的事情，交流学习英语的经验等。
4. 谈你参加此项活动的体会。
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参考词汇：“英语角”：English corner
I’m a senior student. I like English very much. Besides attending English lessons
at school, I often go to the English corner in the park near my home on Saturday
morning. It was set up (formed) two years ago. Many high school students gather
there. Sometimes, some college students and even foreign friends are present at the
English corner. There, we practice our spoken English, talk about what we are
interested in, exchange our experience in learning English and so on. I’ve learned a
lot.
I have greatly improved myself in English since I visited it. It is really a great help
to me.
必修二作文话题素材整理
UNIT 1 CULTURAL HERITAGE ：Writing—Write a news report
题型解读
新闻报道往往从现实生活中选择最新的谋篇思路
首段：引出报道话题
事实，及时加以报道。新闻要以事实说话，主体段落：介绍人物事迹
它是由时间、地点、人物以及事情的起因、尾段：给予支持和关注
经过、结果等要素组成的
满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句
1．There is a heritage protection organization in Wuhu who are taking action to protect the cultural
heritage.
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在芜湖有一个文化遗产保护组织，他们正在采取行动保护文化遗产。
2．Their deeds have attracted our attention.
他们的行动引起了我们的注意。
3．After observing and interviewing them, I will make a brief introduction as follows.
在对他们进行观察和访谈之后，我将做如下简要介绍。
亮点出彩篇中句
1．They travel to search for and take pictures of cultural relics as well as old houses.
他们四处寻找文物和老房子并且拍摄有关照片。
2．Their money and abilities are limited.
他们的金钱和能力有限。
3．They will also show the public the worrying situation of cultural relics by showing the pictures to
them.
他们也会通过向公众展示照片的形式让公众了解令人担忧的文物状况。
4．They help in the form of raising money and call on people to take part.
他们以筹集资金的形式提供帮助，并号召人们参与其中。
韵味无穷结尾句
1．It is their deeds that have made a difference.
他们的行动已经产生了很大的影响。
2．They wake up people's awareness of heritage protection through action.
他们通过行动唤醒人们的文化遗产保护意识。
3．It is our duty to protect the cultural heritage.
保护文化遗产是我们大家的责任。
4．Don't let cultural relics disappear in our generation.
不要让文物消失在我们这一代。
写作规范
假定你是校新闻社的一名记者。你得知芜湖有一个组织在采取行动保护文化遗产，请用英语写一篇有关他们的新闻报道。
内容包括：1.寻找文物并拍照； 2.寻找老房子并帮忙修缮；3.把照片展示给公众并筹集资金。
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注意：写作词数应为80左右
体裁
人称
第应用文
(新闻报道)
三人称
一般现在时
时态
要要
点
结
构
图
尾段
活动意义并且发出呼吁
主体段落
此组织的具体行动
开头点题
报道的目的
第二步：核心词汇 想周全
1．文化遗产保护组织
2．采取行动
3．引起关注
4．与某人会面 .
5．对……有深入的了解
6．唤醒人们的文化遗产保护意识
7．值得关注
第三步：由词及句 雏形现
1．在芜湖有一个文化遗产保护组织正在采取行动保护文物，他们的行动引起了我们的关注。
.
2．跟他们进行了一次会面之后，我们更加深入地了解了。
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3．他们寻找文物并给文物拍照。
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4．他们将会把照片展示给公众，以唤起他们的文化遗产保护意识并获得他们的支持。
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5．他们把筹集的钱用来帮助修缮年代久远的老房子。
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6．他们是值得我们关注的一群人。
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第四步：句式升级 造亮点
用定语从句合并3,4句
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第五步：合理过渡 完美卷面
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答案
第二步：核心词汇 想周全
ge protection organization/group action /attract one's attention
with sb a deeper/better understanding of people's awareness of heritage
protection e attention
第三步：由词及句 雏形现
is a heritage protection organization in Wuhu who are taking action to
protect the cultural heritage, whose deeds draw our attention
having a meeting with the members, we have a deeper understanding of them
search for cultural relics and take photos of them
will show the photos to the public to arouse their awareness of
heritage preservation as well as gain their support
money they raise is used to help repair the old houses from ancient times
are a group of persons who deserve our attention
第四步：句式升级 造亮点
用定语从句合并3,4句
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They_search_for_cultural_relics_and_take_photos_of_them,_which_they_will_show_to_the_public_to_arouse_their_awareness_of_heritage_preservation_as_well_as_gain_their_
support.
第五步：合理过渡 完美卷面
There is a heritage protection organization in Wuhu who are taking action to protect the cultural
heritage, whose deeds draw our attention. After having a meeting with the members, we have a deeper
understanding of them.
They search for cultural relics and take photos of them, which they will show to the public to arouse
their awareness of heritage preservation as well as gain their support. What's more, the money they raise
is used to help repair the old houses from ancient times.
They are a group of persons who deserve our attention. Please join in the organization!
UNIT 2 WILDLIFE PROTECTION : Writing—Write a poster
题型解读
海报是常见的一种宣传形式，它属于应用文文体的范畴。海报的内容可涉及演讲、报告、演出、电影、比赛等，也可是公益性的宣传，如环保、动物保护等。海报的特点是简明扼要，语言精炼而具有感染力
满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句
1．正如我们所知，动物正因各种原因而濒临灭绝。
As we know, animals are dying out for a variety of reasons.
2．据我们所知，多种濒临灭绝的动物正以惊人的速度。
As we know, kinds of endangered animals are dying out at an alarming rate.
3．毫无疑问，动物是我们忠实的朋友。
There is no doubt that animals are our loyal friends.
谋篇思路
首段：现象或活动的背景
主体段落：针对现象可以采取的措施
尾段：发出呼吁以及活动的意义
亮点出彩篇中句
1．我们应该禁止人们随意捕杀动物。
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We should forbid people to kill animals at random.
2．我们应该尽我们所能保护动物的生存环境。
We should do what we can to protect animals' living environment.
3．我们应该唤起人们的动物保护意识。
We should raise/arouse people's awareness of animal protection.
4．迫切需要提高/唤起人们保护动物的意识。
It is urgent to raise/arouse people's awareness of animal protection.
韵味无穷结尾句
1．保护野生动物就是保护我们自己。
Protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
2．保护野生动物是保护自然平衡的一种很好的方式，这关系到人类的生存和发展。
Protecting wild animals is a good way to keep the balance of nature, which affects the survival and
development of mankind.
3.是时候我们该行动起来了。
It's high time that we took action/we should take action.
4．应该出台严格的法律以确保濒危动物的安全。
Strict laws should be made to ensure the safety of endangered animals
5．我呼吁每个人尽我们的一份力量来保护动物
I appeal to/call on everyone to do our bit to protect the animals.
写作规范
假定你是班长李华，你看到华南虎的有关报道，感觉华南虎状况令人担忧。现在请你以学生会的名义用英语写一篇有关华南虎的海报，号召全班同学保护动物。
内容包括：
1．华南虎的现状(野外没有；现存30～80只)；2.华南虎受危害的原因：获取皮毛；3.正在采取措施帮忙恢复野生虎数量；4.我们该做些什么(禁止买卖)。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
第一步：认真审题 谋篇布局
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体裁
人称
时态
要
点
开头点题
主体段落
提出华南虎现状
陈述受危害原因及采取措施
发出呼吁，说明我们应该怎么应用文(海报)
第三人一般现在结
称
时
构
尾段
图
做
第二步：核心词汇 想周全
1．处于危险境地 ______________ 2．据报道 ______________
3．被猎杀为了获取 ______________ 4．导致；促成 ______________
5．实施；贯彻 ______________ 6．保护…受
第三步：由词及句 雏形现
1．众所周知，华南虎现在处于危险境地，野生状态下一只也没有。
_________________________________________________________________________.
2．据报道，动物园里存活着的华南虎也只有30～80只，情况令人担忧。
_________________________________________________________________________.
3．人们猎杀野生虎为了获取它的皮毛，这导致了这种。
_________________________________________________________________________.
4．保护它免遭灭绝迫在眉睫。
_________________________________________________________________________.
5．为了增加野生虎的数量，一项计划正在被实施，包括训练它们的野外生存能力。
_________________________________________________________________________.
6．正如姚明在公益广告中所说的“没有买卖，就没有杀害。”
_________________________________________________________________________
7．该是我们采取行动的时候了。
_________________________________________________________________________.
第四步：句式升级 造亮点
用so...that合并4,5句
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免…
第五步：合理过渡 完美卷面
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答案：
1in danger
2..it is reported that
hunted for
bute to
out
t...from/against
See it die?
As we know, the South China Tiger is in danger now with none left in the wild. It is reported that
there are only 30～80 living in the zoo, which is worrying.
The wild tiger is hunted for its skin and fur, which contributes to the situation. It is so urgent to
protect it from dying out that a plan is being carried out to increase the number of wild tigers, including
training them to live in the wild.
As Yao Ming says in his public service advertisement, “No business, no killing.” It's high time that
we took action.
UNIT 3 THE INTERNET ：Writing—Write a blog post
题型解读
谋篇思路
帖文属于应用文的一种，经常考查网络安全这一话题。首段：说明网上购物出现的问题
涉及网络安全的帖文在写作时，应具体说明网络安全主体段落：如何应对并解决问题
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的现象及解决办法
尾段：表达希望
满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句
1．毋庸置疑网络给我们的生活带来了很大的便利。
There is no denying that the Internet has brought about great convenience to our life.
2．然而，网络也有它的缺点。
However, the network also has its disadvantages/drawbacks.
3．由于网上购物而导致个人信息泄露是一种现象， 比如更多的骚扰电话或账户被盗。It is a
,disturbance call
It is a phenomenon that our personal information is let out by online shopping, such as
more disturbance calls or accounts stolen.
4．如下是一些实用技巧。
Here are some useful tips as follows.
亮点出彩篇中句
1．不要发布有关你个人秘密的信息。
Don't post information concerning your personal secret.
2．你最好不要相信你看到的所有东西，其中有些是假的。
You had better not believe everything you read, some of which is false.
3．不要点击有大量福利/诱饵的链接。
Don't click on the links where there is a large amount of welfare/lure.
4．如果你不想成为坏人的目标，要文明使用网络。
Be polite online if you don't want to be targets of ill persons.
亮点出彩篇中句
4．不要发布有关你个人秘密的信息。
Don't post information concerning your personal secret.
5．你最好不要相信你看到的所有东西，其中有些是假的。
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You had better not believe everything you read, some of which is false.
6．不要点击有大量福利/诱饵的链接。
Don't click on the links where there is a large amount of welfare/lure.
4．如果你不想成为坏人的目标，要文明使用网络。
Be polite online if you don't want to be targets of ill persons.
5．网上有人会利用你的信息攻击你的账户。
Someone online will take advantage of your information and attack your accounts.
6．越吸引人的东西就越危险。(,)
The more attractive it is, the more dangerous it is.
韵味无穷结尾句
1．加以注意的话，这些问题是可以避免的。
The problems can be avoided if special attention is paid to it.
2．互联网使我们的生活更加方便，其利大于弊。
The Internet makes our life more convenient, whose advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
写作规范
假定你是李华，请你针对目前由于网上购物而导致个人信息泄露，银行卡里的钱被盗等现象，用英语写一篇帖子，提醒大家注意网络安全。
内容包括：1.使用熟悉的网站；2.使用加强密码；3.不要使用公共电脑上网买东西。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
第一步：认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
应用文
(帖文)
人称
时态
要 点 结
第一人称
一般现在时
构 图
开头点题
主体段落
尾段
说明网上购物带来的安全隐患
如何在网上安全购物
希望大家提起注意
第二步：核心词汇 想周全
1．毋庸置疑 2．除某物以外；随同……一起
3．泄露 4．骚扰电话
5．利用
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第三步：由词及句 雏形现
1．今天我博客的内容是关于网上购物所带来的安全问题。
2．毋庸置疑网上购物带来了便利，但是随之而来的是弊端。
3．如下是一些实用技巧。
4．不要轻易使用陌生网站，不管有什么样的吸引力。
5．使用加强密码是个好办法，这种密码不好破解。
6．最好不要使用公共电脑上网买东西。
7．用这种方式，个人信息容易被他人利用。
8．正如谚语所说的“防患于未然。”
9．希望网络能够更好且更安全地服务于我们。
第四步：句式升级 造亮点
使用定语从句合并6,7句
第五步：合理过渡 完美卷面
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答案：
1. there is no denying that with out
bance call advantage of
Today, I will blog about the security problems brought about by online shopping. There is no denying
that online shopping brings us convenience along with disadvantages. Here are some useful tips as
follows.
In the first place, don't use unfamiliar websites no matter what attraction there is. Additionally, it is a
good idea to use strong passwords, which are hard to crack. Lastly, we had better not use public
computers to shop online，in which way personal information is easily taken advantage of by others.
Just as the saying goes, “Better safe than sorry.” Hope the network can serve us better and more
safely.
UNIT 4 HISTORY AND TRADITIONS: Writing—Write something about scenery
题型解读
谋篇思路
近几年高考全国卷并未涉及对说明文类作文的考查，但说明文因首段：引出话题，点明景点位置
其实用性的特点，也是未来高考命题的趋势所在。说明过程要清主体段落：所听、所见
晰，层次分明，语言简洁贴切
满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句
and Skylineis located at the joining place of Zhangbei County and Chongli County in
Zhangjiakou City.
草原天路位于张家口市张北县和崇礼县的交界处。
and Skyline is one of the ten most beautiful highways in Chinese mainland..
草原天路是中国大陆十大最美丽的公路之一。
尾段：所想
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and Skyline is 130 km in length.
草原天路长达130公里。
亮点出彩篇中句
1. The road winds its way, floating among the green mountains like a black ribbon
大路蜿蜒曲折，像飘在绿色山间的黑色丝带。
2. White clouds roll freely in the blue sky, changing from time to time.
白云在蓝天上自由翻滚，时而变换。
3. The sea of flowers in the green fields is swaying with the wind，which is delightful
绿野花海随风摇曳，令人心旷神怡。
of cattle and sheep dot the endless grassland
成群的牛羊点缀在无边无际的草原上。
5. Terraces are very colourful, like a watercolour painting.
梯田色彩分明，像是一幅水彩画。
6. Against the blue sky and white clouds, the red roofs look more brilliant
在蓝天白云的映衬下，红色的房顶显得更加艳丽。
7. It is refreshing and relaxing to walk on the quiet paths, enjoying the fresh air
and listening to the birds sing
在幽静的小径上散步，呼吸新鲜空气，聆听鸟鸣，令人心旷神怡。
韵味无穷结尾句
1. In fact, its beauty is far beyond my description.
其实它的美远超出我的描述。
2. It is better to see once than hear a hundred times./
3. Seeing is believing./To see is to believe
百闻不如一见。
4. Go and experience its beauty in person, which won't disappoint you.
亲自去体验一下它的美吧，你绝对不会失望的。
whole journey is full of scenery, and the beauty is unforgettable to me.
一路走来全是风景，那种美和感受令我难以忘怀。
写作规范
假定你是李华，今年暑假你去张家口的草原天路游玩，请你用英语介绍一下天路风景。
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内容包括：
1.地理位置：张北县和崇礼县交界，总长130公里；
2.草原美景：湛蓝的天空，白云飘飘，触手可及；起伏的草原，绿野中片片花海；牛羊成群，悠闲静谧；
3.草原美食及活动：烤全羊；篝火晚会。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
提示词：草原天路 Grassland Skyline 篝火晚会 bonfire party
第一步：认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
要
点
说明文
(景点)
结
第三人称
一般现在时
构
图
开头点题
主体段落
尾段
地理位置
所见所闻
所想
第二步：核心词汇 想周全
1．位于…… _______________
2．蜿蜒前进 _________________
3．总长…… __________________
4．被……点缀 _________________
5．品尝/体验…… _______________
6．起伏的山丘 ________________
7．视觉的盛宴 ______________
第三步：由词及句 雏形现
1．草原天路位于张家口市张北县与崇礼县交界处，全长130公里。
___________________________________________________________________.
2．白云在天空翻滚，似乎触手可及。
___________________________________________________.
3．满山坡的花草是视觉的盛宴。
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___________________________________________________.
4．起伏的草地被成群的牛羊点缀着。
___________________________________________________.
5．清晨走在幽静的小径上，听着鸟儿的歌唱，呼吸着新鲜的空气，看着牛羊静静地吃草，我们感到轻松，神清气爽。
_____________________________________________________________________.
6．夜幕降临，我们可以惬意地吃烤羊肉，看篝火晚会。
____________________________________________________________.
7．一路走来全是风景，那种美令我难以忘怀！
___________________________________________________________!
第四步：句式升级 造亮点
用with复合结构合并3,4句
________________________________________________________________.
第五步：合理过渡 完美卷面
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
located in/at one's way dotted with a distance of
a taste of rolling hillside 7.a feast for eyes
UNIT 5 MUSIC : Writing—Write a speech
题型解读
谋篇思路
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演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上或某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿，它可以把演讲者的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众以及读者，使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣
首段：引出演讲的主题
主体段落：陈述自己的观点
尾段：总结、强调自己的观点
写作规范
假定你是李华，你们学校要举办一场关于音乐的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下内容准备一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1.人们体验音乐的方式； 2.音乐对人们的影响。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
第一步：认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
一般第一人称
要要 点应用文
(演讲稿)
首段
主体段落
介绍演讲题目
人们体验音乐的方式和音乐对人们的影响
结
现在构
时
图
尾段
总结
满分佳句
夺人眼球开头句
is a great honor for me to deliver my speech here.
我很荣幸能在这里发表演讲。
2.I feel greatly honored to deliver my speech here.
我很荣幸能在这里发表演讲。
3.I feel greatly honored to deliver my speech here, whose topic
我很荣幸在这里发表演讲，我演讲的主题是……。
4.I will give some detailed information to support my idea as follows.
我将提供如下一些详细的信息来支持我的观点。
亮点出彩篇中句
we know, music is through our life.
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正如我们所知，音乐贯穿我们的生活。
is a kind of medicine, which can cure our depression or unhappiness.
音乐是一种药，可以治愈我们的沮丧或不快。
t music, our life will be colourless and tasteless.
没有音乐，我们的生活将会失去色彩，索然无味。
is playing an important role in our life, which is an essential part of our life.
音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，它是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。
is to us what sunshine is to the earth，which brings colour to our life.
音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球。音乐给我们的生活带来色彩。
r we are sad or depressed, there is music to keep us company.
无论我们悲伤或沮丧，都会有音乐陪伴着。
er you listen to music, it's a pleasure. Music makes everything around you look so beautiful.
无论什么时候听音乐都是一种享受，音乐会让周围的一切看起来都那么美好。
is music that gives us encouragement in face of difficulty.
就是音乐能在我们面临困难时给我们鼓励。
韵味无穷结尾句
ther, we can come to/draw a conclusion that we can't be separated from music.
总之，我们可以得出一个结论： 我们离不开音乐。
on the above statements, we can conclude that music makes life better.
基于以上陈述，我们可以得出结论：音乐让生活更美好。
's continue to take music as our companion and enjoy the strength and enjoyment brought by
music.
让我们继续以音乐为伴，享受音乐带来的力量和快乐。
is such a good thing that let's make friends with it.
音乐如此好让我们和它交朋友吧。
写作规范
假定你是李华，你们学校要举办一场关于音乐的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下内容准备一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1.人们体验音乐的方式； 2.音乐对人们的影响。
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注意：写作词数应为80左右。
第一步：认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
要
点
应用文
(演讲稿)
第一人称
一般现在时
首段
主体段落
介绍演讲题目
人们体验音乐的方式和音乐对人们的影响
总结
结
构
图
尾段
第二步：核心词汇 想周全
1．受益于
2．陪伴某人
3．面对
4．减轻压力
5．正如谚语所说
6．有相同的爱好
第三步：由词及句 雏形现
1．我很荣幸在这里发表演讲，我演讲的主题是有关音乐的。
2．通过听歌、唱歌或听音乐会的形式，我们受益于音乐。
3．音乐不仅能使我们放松，而且能帮助我们减轻压力。
4．当我们面对困难时，我们可以从音乐中获得力量和。
5．音乐可以把志同道合的人聚集在一起。
6．就是音乐在我们沮丧时能够陪伴我们。
7．正如谚语所说，“音乐是人生最大的快乐；音乐是生活中的一股清泉。”
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第四步：句式升级 造亮点
句首用faced with改写句4
第五步：合理过渡 完美卷面
必修三作文话题素材整理
B3U1节日庆祝语料库
◁重点词汇短语
节日表达
1．National Day 国庆节
2．Teachers’Day 教师节
3．the Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
4．the Spring Festival 春节
5．the Lantern Festival 元宵节
6．the Valentine’s Day 情人节
7. the Laba Festival腊八节
n Festival
Boat Festival
Day
e Valentine’s Day
Autumn Festival
Ninth Festival
’s Day 母亲节(5月的第2个星期日)
’s Day 父亲节(6月的第3个星期日)
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giving Day 感恩节(11月的最后一个星期四)
memory of ＝ in honor of 为了纪念；追念
praise of 歌颂
celebration of 为了庆祝……
up as 打扮成……
together 聚会
reunion 家庭团聚
23.a symbol of reunion 团圆的象征
the lantern 点灯笼
on(某节日）在（某月某天）
back to追溯到
calendar 农历
的象征
memory/honor of纪念
praise of 歌颂
celebration of 为了庆祝……
together 聚会
one's attention吸引某人的注意力
the full moon赏月
couplets春联
relatives and friends走亲访友
ge greetings互致祝福
respect to向……致敬
farewell to告别……
off fireworks放烟花
firecrackers放鞭炮
42.(be)ready to take on the challenge
乐于接受挑战
43.a wild joy takes hold of sb
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某人欣喜若狂
celebration would be 没有……的庆祝是不完整的
◁节日介绍句式
1. The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th of the first lunar month, marking the end of the
Spring Festival celebrations.
2. Thanksgiving Day is celebrated on the fourth Thursday of November in the United
States, when people show their appreciation for the blessing of the harvest.
3. Spring Festival is celebrated in January or February. The exact date is determined by the
Chinese lunar calendar.
4. It is thought that the Dragon Boat Festival is held in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan
(340-278 BC), who lived in the State of Chu during the Warring States Period.
5. The custom of celebrating the moon dates back to/goes all the way back to the Xia and
Shang dynasties.
6. The Mid-Autumn Festival is known as/recognized as a day to express thanks and love
for our families. People will get together no matter how busy and far away they are.
7. Christmas is a joyful holiday for giving, sharing and reuniting(重聚）with family and
friends.
,the symbol of joy and good luck in Chinese culture,is the major color used in New
Year celebrations.
◁节日庆祝活动句式
was the first time I had visited a temple fair(庙会）by first thing
thatgrabbed(吸引）my attention were all the snacks on offer.
2. But the fun didn't stop at food. Different kinds of folk art were on dis-play at the fair.
3. Besides the food, there were many wonderful shows on the stage. Bands sang traditional
Chinese songs; it never felt strange to me. At midnight dragon and lion dancing began.
Dancers controlled the dragons and lions to jump up and down and follow the ball ahead of
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them. The crowd cheered and rushed to take photos. Suddenly, someone set off
firecrackers(鞭炮）. What ar amazing Lantern Festival!
4. The main event of the festival was the apple pie eating contest.
5. No celebration would be complete without jiaozi. So I decided to learn to make
dumplings from my Mom this time.
making the filling comes my favorite part-the wrapping(包饺子）.
7. There are a wide range of activities for Qingming Festival, such as hav ing an outing
with friends, flying a kite or planting trees.
highlight of the Dragon Boat Festival lies in eating different flavors of zongzi and
watching dragon boat races
9. For most Chinese, watching the Spring Festival Gala is a must. Going to temple fairs
isanother Spring Festival routine(惯例）.
10. One of the most fun activities was the Fright Nights at Playland, a amusement park(游乐园）in were actors in the park who dressed up in scary costumes. They
acted so real that I was scared to stand near them.
11. As a child, Halloween was never just a one-night occasion. it was a month-long event
made up of pumpkin carving(雕刻）,house decorating and costume making. When Oct 31
finally came around, we spent the afternoon together on the edge of our seats(异常兴奋地）as we waited for the moment the sun set to trick-or-treat.
wasn't the last celebration though.(用于承上启下，衔接下文）
’s believed that the moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune.
人们认为月亮是团圆、运气和财富的象征。
14. In addition, not only should we spend some time with our family during festivals
but it is these festivals that remind us to have more time with our family.
另外，在节日期间，我们不仅应当花时间和家人在一起，而且这些节日也提醒人们平时要多陪伴家人。
Mother’s Day approaching, we decided to hold a family party to celebrate the
important day.
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随着母亲节的临近，我们决定举办一场家庭晚会来庆祝这个重要的日子。
16. Wang Hua, our monitor, presented Ms Li with the prepared flowers while some
girls sang songs for her.
我们的班长王华给李老师献上了准备好的花，同时一些女生为李老师唱歌。
◁自身感想相关句式
1. We will never forget that this holiday is a time to give thanks. We feel grateful for the
things that we have.
2. While eating traditional food with family, we not only shared in the festival atmosphere,
but also understood our culture in a concrete(具体的） way.
3. Seeing these breathtaking cherry bombs, a wild joy took hold of me!
4. The Spring Festival allows us to bid farewell to the past and embrace(拥抱）a bright
future.
5. Now the carnival has passed, and we have returned to our peaceful studies. We all feel
fresh and ready to take on the challenge of work. This carnival planted hope for the
future in us
6. I think these Spring Festival traditions are good except for the firecrackers and fireworks,
because they pollute the atmosphere.
7. During the Spring Festival, I forget my unhappiness, and I learn to appreciate the
beauty of life and wish for a better future.
8. How pleasant it is to enjoy the glorious full moon with moon cakes! This is why I love
Mid-Autumn Festival so much.
9. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a joyous time for our family. I can deeply feel the warmth
of home. That is the meaning of Mid-Autumn Festival
◁话题范文
假定你是李华，你的班级决定组织同学们5月30日端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)一起骑自行车去西湖观看龙舟比赛。请你给外教写一封邮件，邀请他上午8：00在学校门口集合，一同前往，感受中国的传统文化。
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注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文必背】
Dear ，
How is everything?
Our class is planning to cycle the West Lake to watch the dragon boat race on May 30,
when the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated ’ll gather at our school gate at 8
am. I’d like to invite you to go with us and experience this unique Chinese culture.
The dragon boat race, originally held in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan, has now
become a common practice and developed into a sport. I’m sure it will be exciting and
enjoyable. Your presence will certainly add to our come and have fun.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
◁记阅读障碍词汇—文意理解无偏差
1. random adj. 随意的，未经事先考虑的
2．advocate vt. 提倡；拥护
3．boycott v. 拒绝参加，抵制
4．adequate adj. 充分的；足够的；可以胜任的
5．participate v. 参与；参加
6．receptionist n. 接待员
7．risk n．&v. 风险；冒险
8．refresh vt. 更新；使恢复；使清新 vi. 恢复精神
9．adventure n. 冒险；奇遇
10．amusement n. 娱乐
11．anniversary n. 周年纪念日
12．athletic adj. 健壮的；运动的
13．audience n. 听众；观众
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14．legend n. 传说；传奇
15．fascinating adj. 极有吸引力的；迷人的
B3U2 Write a review
一、通过提问获取信息
Paragraph 1:Basic information about the story
1. What is the title of the story?
2. What kind of story is it?
3. What is the main idea of the story?
Paragraph 2:Your analysis of the story
4. What is the author's purpose?
5. Were the details of the story clear?
6. Do you think the story achieved its purpose?
Paragraph 3:Your opinion about the story
7. What did you like about the story?
8. What did you not like about the story?
9. Would you recommend this story to others?
Para1: Basic information
二、组织文章
The title of the fable is the stone in the road. It tells ____________
__________________________________________
The fable is meant to teach us__________________________
To achieve the purpose, the author ________________________
A: I enjoy the story, and what impresses me most is that __________
In a word, the fable is well worth reading and I’ll strongly recommend it to others.
B: I don’t think highly of the story because ___________________
In brief, the fable seems not perfect and I’ll not recommend it to others.
三、Checklist：
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1. Does the writer give a short description covering the most important details
of the story?
2. Does the writer give his /her analysis in a reasonable way?
3. Does the writer gives his/her opinion clearly?
4. Is the review well-organized?
5. Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation mistakes?
范文
The title of the fable is The Stone in the Road. It tells a king put the stone in the road to
teach his people a lesson. Many people came along, complained but did nothing. In the end, a
little girl moved it out of the way with all her might and got rewarded.
The story is meant to teach us to take personal responsibility for problems in the community.
To achieve the purpose, the author gives a detailed description of the scenes in time
order,using powerful expressions to create vivid pictures .
I enjoy the story, and what impresses me most is that though the girl was tired, she was
still concerned about others, making all efforts to keep others from harm. It’s
one’s virtue that glitters and makes the world go around. In a word, with powerful language
and an instructive lesson, the fable is well worth reading and I’ll strongly recommend it to
others.
B3U3 旅游话题语料库
【旅游类写作指导】
旅游景点的描写应该属于介绍类说明文，写好这类文章，要注意下列问题：
1. 不宜过多介绍景点。我们可以介绍一下景点的历史、特色、以及它在当地的一个地位……
2. 这种文章是客观的介绍。通常介绍其地理位置、面积、气候、自然资源和居民等，可以根据题目要求加上自己的评论。
3. 组织这类文章的结构，要注意安排好说明顺序，描述要详略得当，重点突出，使文章错落有致。
4. 描述地点时需要我们准确掌握表示方位的词或短语。
5. 本文的时态主要以一般现在时态为主。
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一、用英文介绍旅游景点的历史背景
1. 某地 + has a long history of ... years. 某地有…年的历史。
the old tower has a long history of 2000years. 古塔有两千年的历史
2. 某地 + is a ... place/ history. 某地是具有…年历史的地方/国家。
Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history. 埃及是一个具有悠久历史的阿拉伯国家。
3. 某地 + date back to / 从…时就有的, 回溯到…, 远在…年代。
the old town dates back to the late-seventeenth century. 这座古城建于十七世纪后期。
4. Historically,... What hen
示例：
伦敦始建于公元43年。
London dates back to 43. a. d.
二、用英文介绍旅游景点的自然特点
（一）常用句型：
①某地 + be covered with + ....某地为……所覆盖。
this area is covered with grassland. 这个地区为草原所覆盖。
②某地 + be made up of /consists of…某地由…组成。
如：Sichuan province is made up of a basin and some mountainous areas. 四川省是由一个盆地和山区组成。
（二）常用词语：
continent大陆, mainland大陆，mountain山脉, plain 平原，grassland草原, desert沙漠，forest 森林，valley山谷地，island 岛，ocean大洋，peak山顶, 巅，slope山坡，hill小山，rock 岩石，bank河岸，stream小溪，source源头，spring泉水，canal运河，lake 湖泊，pond池塘，basin盆地，coast 海岸，gulf 海湾，beach 海滩，shore海滩，tide潮，wave 浪，shore海岸，strait 海峡，waterfall瀑布。
示例：
这个岛的三分之一都是森林。
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one-third of the island is covered with forest.
海南省由海南岛和附近的小岛及广阔的海域组成。
hainan province consists of hainan island and neighbouring isles as well as wide sea areas.
三、用英文介绍旅游景点的风景名胜
（一）列举“风景名胜”：
①there are many places of interest, 有许多名胜，比如…。
there are quite a lot of places of interest in Xi’an, such as the terracotta warriors and horses，the old
city wall and so on. 西安有许多名胜，比如兵马俑、古城墙等。
②某地 +has many places of interest, among 某地有许多名胜，其中就有…。
Beijing has many places of interest, among which is the Forbidden City. 北京有许多名胜，其中就有紫禁城。
③ visitors can also spend
④ famous to name but a few.
⑤ . ...is a key site as well/a good place to visit, with结构
⑥ ...allow(s) first hand
（二）表述地区的特色：
①某地 + is famous / 。某地因…而闻名。
Hangzhou is famous/well-known for its beautiful west lake. 杭州以它美丽的西湖而著名。
②某地 + is famous /well-known as ...。某地作为…而闻名。
北京作为中国的首都而闻名。
Beijing is famous as the capital of china.
③ What is treasured is...
④ ..offer a unique range/diversity of ...;all an be found
⑤ There is food to suit everyone’s taste, with 结构
四、用英文介绍旅游景点地理位置
（一）表示“位置”的句型：
① 某地+is / lies + 地点状语。某地位于…。如：
the city lies across the river.这个大城市位于河的两侧。
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② 某地+be located/situated地点状语。某地坐落于…。
如：the new gymnasium is situated at the eastern of the city.这座新体育馆位于城市的东边。
（二）表示“海拔”的句型：
某地+ lies + 数词 + metres above sea-level。某地海拔…米。
如：Xizang lies at an average of 4,000 metres above sea-level.西藏平均海拔4000公尺
示例：
1) 中国位于亚洲东部，太平洋的西岸。
china lies in the east of Asia and on the Western coast of the pacific ocean.
2) 这个美丽的公园坐落于湖的沿岸
the beautiful town is located along the shore of the lake.
3) 这个村子坐落在群山之中。
the village lies among the mountains
五、赞美风景/景色的句型，用于去某地参观时，对景色的赞叹。
美景描写必备词汇： destination/ famous tourist attraction/must-go place/places of interest 名胜;
be struck by 被……迷住 amazing / breath-taking scenery
a dream trip 梦想之旅; 对……有吸引力;
beyond description 难以表达;catch one’s eye 吸引某人的注意
美句欣赏
ally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers
of Chinese civilization. 从个人角度来说,我更愿意(推荐)“长江之旅”,长江是中国最长的河流,是中华文明的发源地之一。
2.I have been organizing a one-day summer camp in Green Hill this Saturday.我一直在组织星期六到Green Hill的夏令营一日游。
that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.随后,我们将在山脚下的湖边进行野餐。
er, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.另外,沿江风景令人叹为观止,拥有很多著名的观光景点。
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5.I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we
will have a great time.我的确希望你能够和我们一起(去爬山),因为Green Hill是个放松的好地方,我们肯定会玩得十分高兴。
5. i have never been to such a lovely place! 从来没见过这么没的风景。
6. it was really a wonderful place! 这个地方真的太好了。
7. the scenery is absolutely breathtaking.景色真是太美了。
8．the scene was as beautiful as a painting! 风景如画。
9. it was so picturesque that i swore it was painted backdrop.那里风景如画，简直像是画上去的背景幕。
10. i felt as if i had been in a different world.仿佛置身于世外桃源。
11. i actually had a fairly restful life.我过了一段悠闲的时光。
12. the combination of wind, sand and sea is really romantic.微风，沙滩和大海真是太浪漫了。
推荐旅游景点的句子
1. If you come to…..for a visit,you will have a chance
2. A is a feast for your eyes.大饱眼福
3. If you come,you can't miss this chance to know Chinese colorful and beautiful cultures.
4. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a fantastic choice.
5. However, the attraction that arouses the greatest appreciation in the reserve
is Tianchi.
6. When you arrive,you are rewarded not only with the sight of its clear
waters ,but also by the view of the other sixteen mountain peaks that surround
Tianchi.
习作参考：
（2017北京）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
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2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.
Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, 1. (最长的河流)and one
of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China
and Chinese people. Moreover, 2. (沿江景色让人惊叹), with many
well-known 3. (观光景点). That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River
will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
longest river scenery along the river is amazing eeing spots
Yours,
Li Hua
Here I’d like to tell you some information about Sichuan Province’s travelling.
Sichuan Province，which capital city is Chengdu, lies in the southwest of china and covers an
area of about 485，000 square kilometers.
It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interests,such as
Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation igou is well known for its beautiful
lakes, whose water is so clear that you can see the bottom of other attraction is the
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2，000 years ago and is still playing a
important part in irrigation today.
In a word, the nice weather, convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot
food can also make your trip even more enjoyable.
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B3U4高一英语议论文--（正反观点题型）语料库
要求考生从正反两个方面来论证某一观点，时态一般用一般现在时。对这
类题型，通常分为四个步骤来写：
第一段：文章开头，总述事件或情况
第二段：阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：主题句＋理由1+理由2+理由3（可根据需要写出几点理由）
第三段：阐述提纲中列举的第二种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：主题句＋理由1+理由2+理由3（可根据需要写出几点理由）
第四段：表明自己的观点结束全文（在结尾的时候，一定要表明自己的观点。）
一、常用过渡性词语：
表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say
表补充递进：besides、in addition、moreover、 what’s worse , apart from that e
表对比：on the one hand…on the other hand、in spite of
表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to
表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so
表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up、on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in
short, in conclusion, in brief, from what I have said above
表转折：however、nevertheless、yet
二、常用句型：
1. 整体表达不同观点：关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
1) There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2) People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others
believe that……（人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……）
3) People may have different opinions on……（人们对……可能会持有不同见解）
4) Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to person.==Different people hold
different attitudes towards（failure）（人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异）
5) There are different opinions among people as to……（对于……人们的观点大不相同）
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6) ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
2. 列举理由
1) . 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
2) 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
3) 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
总结/个人观点
1）In closing, … provides … with…
2）. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
3) In short, it can be said that……（总之，他的意思是……）
4) From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……（从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……）
5) Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come
to the conclusion that……（把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……）
6) Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……）
7) There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.
（毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点）
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8) All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find
out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.（总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题）
Checklist：
1. Does the introduction state the topic?
2. Does the introduction express different opinions about the topic?
3. Does the body give arguments with suitable supporting information?
4. Does the closing express the writer’s opinion and end properly?
5. Are there any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors?
牛刀小试
最近新潮的“苹果体验中心”走进北大图书馆,对此,你班展开了激烈的讨论。假如你是李明,现请根据下表内容给《中国日报》的编辑写一封信,说说你们讨论的情况以及你个人的看法。
赞成的同学认为 反对的同学认为 你的观点
许多大学生喜欢苹果产苹果体验中心占用的那
品,他们使可以让更多块空间本可以让更多的的学生用来读书、学习,学生用来读书、学习，用苹果产品是为了学习,苹果体验中租给商租给商家违反了大学和图书馆的本意。
家违反了大学和图书馆
的本心方便了学生,没什么过错。
苹果跟学术机构有合作大多数苹果产品很昂项目,通过生是买不起贵，一般大学生是买不
的,容易使学生,尤其这起的，容易使学生，尤些项目,学生可以得到优惠。
其是买不起的学生分心
注意:1、文章必须包括表中的全部内容;
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2、词数100左右;
3、参考词汇:分心一distraction 合作的一cooperative
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
Recently an Apple Experience Center appeared in the library of Peking University. Our
class have had a discussion about it.
Some students are in favor of the idea, holding the opinion that many university students
love Apple products, which they can use for academic purpose. An Apple center makes it
more convenient for students. There is nothing wrong with it. What's more Apple has similar
cooperative projects with academic institutions. Students can get special discounts through
such projects as well.
However, some students don't agree with the idea. Firstly, the space for the Apple center
could have been used to allow more students to study and read. Renting it to a business goes
against the very purpose of universities and libraries. Secondly. most of Apple's products are
very expensive and not easily affordable to the common students. They could be a big
distraction to students, especially those who can't afford them.
In my opinion, I think it is a good idea. The university campus is already highly
commercial,and Apple's presence is actually much more relevant to students' academic
careers than some other commercial activities commonly found in universities.
Yours,
Li Ming
B3U5 读后续写中的对话写作
在续写写作中，相较于用枯燥的、阐释性的长篇大论去传达主题，对话这种方式不仅更快捷有效，而且更能激起读者的情感，让他们产生更坦诚、私密之感。当然，你需要小心，不能过多，也不能过于单调，要围绕主题、传达主题。
一.利用对话描写需要注意的 3个原则
1.控制对话的比重，对话促进情节的发展，但不能代替故事情节，1到2处即可。即∶ 简短+地道+量少。
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2.对话内容应符合人物性格特点。
3.对话内容应紧扣原文主题和中心。不要脱离文章主线，说一些不着边际的话。
二.对话的 3种表现形式
1.对话标签在前
She said,"I would like to go with you, but I haven't finished my homework. "
2. 对话标签在后
"I would like to go with you, but I haven't finished my homework."She said.
3. 对话标签在句子中间
"I would like to go with you,"she said,"but I haven't finished my homework. "
注意∶对话标签在后或者在句子中间时（第 2，3 种情况），如果主语
是名词，则可以倒装。而代词不可以倒装（said she 是错误的）。
"I would like to go with you, but I haven't finished my homework."said
Emily/Emily said.
"I would like to go with you,"said Emily/ Emily said,"but I haven't finished my homework."
三、让你的对话标签不平庸的小技巧
在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。
1、添加恰当的介词短语表不同语气或嗓音 in a/an+形容词+tone ；in a/an+形容词+voice
"I would love to，" said Emily in a pleasant tone.愉悦的语气用…的语气
如∶ in a pleasant 愉悦的/firm 坚定的/rude 粗鲁的/sad 悲伤的 tone也可以用 in a tone
of +名词的搭配
如∶ in a tone of surprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/command 命令/sarcasm 讽刺
②"I didn't mean to，"she murmured in a low voice.小声地说道用…的声音
如∶ in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice
③"..I..don't think I’m right for the part," I replied with embarrassment.
2、 用介词短语或者副词来表达情感
"I will never do that again，"I answered firmly 坚定地.
=Firmly，I answered，"I will never do that again."可将副词提到句首
介词短语有∶ in∶ in surprise/shock/sorrow 伤心/horror 害怕
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with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride/caution/care/patience/certainty 坚定 等等
副词有∶ firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully 等等
3、 添加一点动作描写小结∶在说的同时，可以加入伴随动作，即说话的同时（自己/别人）在做什么，用动作描写来辅助对话。可以用 as 引导的从句，非谓语，并列谓语以及with 的复合结构。
（1)"Well,"said the farmer, as he rubbed the sweat of the back of his
neck，此处在说的动作后，紧跟了as 引导的状语从句，翻译成"一边，一边"。他一边擦脖子后面的汗水一边说"好啊。
"(2)"I want that one,"the boy said,pointing to the little dog= Pointing the litle dog, the boy
said,"I want that one"此处在说的动作后，紧跟了 doing 的非谓语结构，表伴随。
(3)The farmer picked up the dog,knelt down and said in a soft voice,"It's yours now."
=The farmer picked up the dog and knelt down,saying,"It's yours now."此处是拿起狗，蹲下并温柔地说的三个并列动作，可以用并列谓语，也可以用第二条中的非谓语。
(4) With her head down/With tears in her eyes, she said,"Sorry."
四、包含情绪的各种各样的"说"。
1.喊叫∶ shout 大喊;scream尖叫;yell大喊;exclaim 惊叫（因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫）;cry out 喊叫; call 喊叫如∶ He yelled at her， "You are an idiot."
2. 问与答∶ ask 询问; reply 回复;answer 回答;如∶She answered in a firm tone，"That
doesn't matter." 3. 建议∶ propose; suggest; offer
如∶ She offered，"How about going to the beach this weekend?" 4.其他的说∶ add 补充说道=continue 继续说道; retort 反驳道; explain解释道;state 陈述道; protest抗议道;sob 哭诉道;agree同意地说;comfort 安慰道;promise 承诺道;assure 保证道;insist坚持说;announce 宣布道;mumble/whisper/murmur/grunt 嘟囔; stammer/stutter 结巴地说
如∶ After a slight pause，she added，"Thank you."
James comforted her,"Don't worry about your son."
典范八中表示说话的的不同词汇
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