2023年12月13日发(作者：)
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中考初中英语被动语态系列讲座（一精---动词主要时态、情态动词被动语态精讲及练习
动词的语态是表示句子主语与谓语动词之间关系的一种动词形式。英语中动词有两种语态：主动语态和被动语态。主动语态表示主语是动作的执行者或发出者，被动语态表示主语是动作的承受者。被动语态通常由“助动词be的各种时态变化 +及物动词的过去分词”构成。被动语态主要使用在以下场合：不知道或没有必要说明动作的执行者是谁；当我们强调动作的执行者时，我们使用“by+ 执行者”。在被动语态句中，谓语动词必须是及物动词，而不及物动词是不能构成被动语态的。下面我们就从动词时态、情态动词、带双宾语的被动语态及主动语态变被动语态的主要变换方式等几个方面，结合2019年的中考英语考题来说明被动语态的用法。
考点一：主要时态的被动语态基本句式结构及用法
时态
基本句式
示例
①We are often asked to read
Chinese classic poems aloud by our
Chinese teacher. 我们语文老师经一般现在时
主语+ am/ are/ is +过去分词+
常要求我们大声朗读中国古典诗其他
歌。
②Mike is told to wash dishes after
dinner every evening.迈克每天晚上晚饭后被告知洗碗。
①A farm was visited by us
主语+ was/ were +过去分词+
yesterday. 昨天我们参观了一个农一般过去时
其他
场。
②The bridge was built in 2009.这座大桥2009年建成的。
①The project has been finished
already.这项工程已经完成了.
现在完成时
主语+ have( has) been +过去分②Over 3,000 trees have been
词+ 其他
planted on the hills in the past few
years. 在过去的几年里，这些山上栽植了3,000多棵树。
①A Christmas party is going to be
①主语+ am/ are/ is+ going to
held in our school next Friday
be +过去分词+ 其他
一般将来时
其他
evening. 下周星期五晚上，一场②A new high speed way will be
built between Chongqing and
Yunnan during the two years. 两年②主语+ will/ shall +过去分词+
圣诞节聚会将在我校举行。
在被动语态句中的动词须为及物动词
注意事项
内，一条连接云南和重庆之间的高速公里将修建。
①Chinese classic novels are being
read by students in China. 在中现在进行时
主语+ am/ are/ is +being +过去分词+ 其他
国，学生们正在阅读古典小说。
②A basketball match is being held
on the school playground now. 现在一场篮球赛正在学校操场上举行。
【典型考例1】（2019广西贵港）---Do you know the famous artist in red？
---Sure．He to the art festival in our city every year．
A．invites B．invited C．is invited D．was invited
【析】正确答案：C。句意是：你认识那位穿红衣服的著名艺术家吗？ 当然，他每年都受邀到我们市参加艺术节。句子主语he是动作invite的涉及的对象，因此，及物动词invite应使用被动语态形式，根据句末时间状语every year可知，本题为一般现在时的被动语态，所以，正确答案为C。
【典型考例2】（2019内蒙包头）----Why did you leave that position?
---I ______a better position in another factory.
A. offer B. offered C. am offered D. was offered
【析】正确答案：D。句意是：你为什么离职了呢？另一家工厂为我提供了一个更好的职位。句子主语I为机务动词offer涉及对象，因此，应使用被动语态。根据上文可知，为我提供职位的事情是过去，用一般过去时被动语态。所以正确答案为D。
【典型考例3】（20198甘肃天水） National Day celebrations for China's seventieth birthday
________in about three months.
A. will be held B. will hold held D. was held
【析】正确答案：A。句意是：中国70周年生日庆典将在3个月后举行。句子主语
National Day celebrations for China's seventieth birthday为及物动词hold涉及的对象，根据句末时间状语in about three months可知，应使用一般将来时的被动语态。因此，正确答案为A。
考点二：情态动词的被动语态基本句式及用法
情态动词
can /could
基本句式
主语+can/could+be+动词过去分词
示例
①Chinese can be spoken in
Thailand. 在泰国可以说汉语。
②A motorcar can’t be run on the
注意事项
含情态动词的被动high way. 高速路上摩托车不能行使。
visit a French friend. 当你拜访一位may/might
主语+may/might+be+动词过去分词
法国朋友时，一件小礼品也许受人欢迎的。
②Some flowers might be sent to
her on her birthday.母亲生日那天也许会送几束花给她。
Today , the forest have almost gone.
People must be stopped from
must
主语+must+be+动词过去分词
cutting down too many trees. 今天，森林几乎已经消失了。必须阻止人们不要砍伐太多的树子了。
①The dustbin should be carried
should
主语+should+be+动词过去分词
every day. 垃圾应该每天搬运掉。
②Students’ homework should be
finished in time.学生们的作业应该及时完成。
语态句中，情态住一定不能掉be。
①A gift may be welcome when you
动词后记【典型考例1】（浙江舟山）According to the present law, drunk driving must _____
(punish)seriously.
【析】正确答案：be punished。句意是：根据现行法律，严重的最佳一定会受到处罚的。句子的主语drunk driving是动作punish的承受者，应使用动词的被动语态，由于句中有情态动词must，含情态动词的被动语态为must be punished，因此，正确答案为be punished。
【典型考例2】（2019四川遂宁）Some people think trees ______ on Tree Planting Day only.
plant be planted be plant D. should be planting
【析】正确答案B。句意是：有些人认为，只有在植树节才该植树。宾语从句的主语trees是动词plant涉及的对象，因此，及物动词plant应使用被动语态。由于有情态动词should，所以被动语态为should be planted。
【强化练习】
一、根据汉语意思，写出符合句意要求的单词。
1.（2019江苏扬州）In the past, many rivers were _____ seriously, but now they are clean up.
（污染）
2.（2019湖北荆门） The sports meeting was （取消）because of the terrible weather.
3.（2019山东泰安）We all agree that the driver who drives after drinking wine（酒）should be
p________.
二、用所给动词的正确形式填空。
1.（2019浙江金华）Every year millions of trees ________(plant) in this way. 2.（2019山东青岛） He ___________（require） to hand in his science report last week.
3.（2019浙江台州） The mountain was high and it was cold. Everything _______ (cover) by
snow and ice and it was dangerous.
4.（2019浙江温州）One hundred trees _____ (plant) along the riverside yesterday afternoon.
5.（2019浙江湖州） I've found a friendly guide here and yesterday I (show) around the city.
6.（2019甘肃庆阳）Some other languages may have more speakers, like Chinese. But English
(use) in many different areas.
7.（2019山东滨州）Have you ever read the book A brief History of Times? It _______(write) by
Stephen Hawking in 2013.
8.（2019江苏泰州） It is reported that Taizhou Sports Park _____________ (complete) next
year.
9.（2019甘肃敦煌） Smoking_________(not allow ) in public.
10.（2019贵州遵义）He doesn’t like doing exercises and sleeps too late. He likes eating junk
food , too. He is fat now, and he (ask) to lost weight by his doctor.
11.（2019江苏无锡） It’s said that 5G network _______________(bring) into use at the end of
this year in Wu Xi.
三、单项选择
1.（2019重庆A卷）His car ______ five years ago, but it looks quite new.
bought bought
2.（2019山东临沂） Around the world, 300 million tons of plastic _________each year, of
which about 10 percent ends up in the sea.
A. is created B. was created C. creates
3.（2019四川达州）---Dr. Bethune helped a lot of Chinese in the 1930s, he is a great
international soldier.
----I know, so he _____ still _____ in both China and Canada now.
; remembered ; remembered ; remember ; remembering
4.（2019江西）Gina went to the doctor’s yesterday and she _____ about the importance of good
living habits once more.
told told told
5.（2019重庆B卷）These machines _____ in their factory by themselves last year.
made made
6.（2019江苏连云港）It's reported the medals for the 2020 Olympic Games in Tokyo
__________ from 100% recycled material.
A. are making B. have made C. is made D. will be made
7.（2019安徽） The villagers expect that the building of the bridge ____ before the rainy season
comes.
A. is completed B. was completed C. will be completed D. has been completed
8.（2019四川南充） ---Lucy, what have you learnt from this history class?
---Paper __________first __________about 2,000 years ago in China.
A. is; invented B. was; invented C. is; inventing D. was; inventing 9.（2019天津）The Hong Kong—Zhuhai—Macao Bridge in 2018. We are proud of it.
A. is completed B. is completing C. was completed D. completes
10.（2019江苏扬州） The 2021 International Horticultural Expo _____ in Yangzhou.
A. holds B. will hold C. is held D. will be held
11.（2019四川成都）Unluckily, Notre Dame de Pairs （巴黎圣母院）______ this April. We
felt so sad for that.
burnt burnt been burnt
12.（2019江苏盐城）In Chinese culture ,children born in the Year of the Monkey ______ to be
smart.
be said said
13.（2019甘肃敦煌）. A baby's first month birthday is a special event in China
and_____with a special Party.
A. celebrates B .is celebrated C. was celebrated celebrate
14.（2019广东） It is said that one Greater Bay Area university ____ in Guangdong in the future.
be built B. build C. will build D. is built
15.（2019湖北襄阳)--- I enjoy walking on the clean streets in the morning.
----You know they by the hard-working cleaners every day.
A. clean B. are cleaned C. are cleaning D. will clean
16.（2019湖北孝感）----I'm tired of cleaning the house.
----Sweeping robots—more and more _______widely today. Why not buy one?
A. are used B. were used C. are using D. used
17（2019湖北黄冈）----Oh, your room is too dirty, Mike!
----Sorry, Mum. It ___ _yesterday. I forgot to do it.
A. didn’t clean B. isn’t cleaned C. was cleaned D. wasn’t cleaned
18.（2019湖南益阳）. A lot of trees ________ every spring in Yiyang city.
A. plant B. is planted C. are planted
19.（2019河北）These cakes_________ with chocolate. Have one, please.
A. fill B. filled C. are filled D. were filled
20.（2019湖南长沙）--- Perfect photos! Good skills!
---- Thank you. They ______ by my Huawei mobile phone. In fact, I am not skillful at all.
A．took B．were taken C．will be taken
21.（2019湖北咸宁）--- The passenger refused to move after taking another one’s seat!
---What a shame! He according to the newly credit system(诚信体系).
A. punish B. punished C. will punish D. will be punished
22.（2019四川眉山）Paper first about two thousand years ago in China by Cai Lun.
A. is; inventing B. is; invented C. has; invented
1954.
ed included included
24.（2019北京）My advice on how to save paper by my class last Monday.
A. accepts B. accepted C. was accepted D. is accepted
D. was; invented
23.（2019福建）As one of the most exciting sports, volleyball ______ in the Olympic Games in 25.（湖北黄石）In February, Chinese tech company Huawei____Mate X，afoldable（可折叠的）5G mobile phone.
A. is introducing uced uces introduced
26.（2019湖北宜昌）---It’s reported that 31 of the brave young men _____ in a big fire in
Sichuan.
---I don’t know who they are, but I know who they are for.
killing killed killed
27.（20198湖北鄂州）I think AI (人工智能) in many fields will to help us solve many
problems in the future.
A. used, be used B. is used, be used C. used, use D. is used, use
28.（2019湖南怀化）Hong Kong---Zhuhai---Marcao Bridge （港珠澳大桥）_____ in
December , 2009 and it opened in October , 2018.
built built
29.（2019湖南岳阳）It’s reported that Notre --Dome de Paris（巴黎圣母院）_____ in April
2019.
burnt burnt burnt
30.（2019湖南株洲）The students in this school ______ to choose their own school uniforms.
allowed d allowing
31.（2019湖南邵阳）---Waiter! I’d like some Shaoyang rice noodles.
----Sorry, sir. Rice noodles ______ only in the morning.
serve served
32.（2019河南）----Where is your book report? Did your dog eat it again?
----No, it ______ almost ____ ，and then my computer just died on me!
A.不填；finishes B.不填；finished ; finished ;finished
33.（2019吉林）The environment in my hometown is improving because many trees
______every year.
d planted
34.（2019黑龙江绥化）The little boy is crying because his toy ____ by someone a moment ago.
broken broken
35.（2019黑龙江龙东地区）Many teachers from cities _____ to the west provinces of our
country to help the poor students there next year.
send sent be sent
36.（2019四川德阳）If I __________five minutes, I’ll get everything ready.
give be given given given
37.（2019贵阳）The Meitan Tea Museum , a famous building in Guizhou , _____ in the shape of
a giant teapot.
be built be built C. was built
38.（2019广西河池）Look at the flowers on both sides of the streets. They _____ last month.
planted planted planting planting
39.（2019广西柳州）This book _____ by children.
loved
40.（2019广西桂林）As we know, printing ______during the Sui and Tang Dynasties in China.
ed invented invented
41.（2019北京） My advice on how to save paper by my class last Monday.
A. accepts B. accepted C. was accepted D. is accepted
42（2019海南）----China plans to send another spaceship into space.
---Wow! More and more secrets _____ soon.
going to discover be discovered C. have discovered
43.（2019昆明）With the rapid progress in high technology, 5G around most parts of China
in the near future.
used using use be used
44.（2019辽宁盘锦）Our life _______ greatly by 3D printing technology in a few years.
A. will influence B. influences C. will be influenced D. is influenced
45.（2019辽宁本溪）As far as I know, the robot that can sweep the floor ________ in the 1980s.
A. is invented B. invented C. was invented D. has invented
46.（2019辽宁铁岭）The Chinese traditional poems to spread by popular singers.
singing singing sung sung
47.（2019河北） These cakes_________ with chocolate. Have one, please.
A. fill B. filled C. are filled D. were filled
48.（2019江苏镇江）Have you heard that the 2022 Winter Olympics ______________ in
Beijing?
A. held B. are held C. were held D. will be held
49.（江苏南通 )----What do you think of yesterday’s activity in your community?
----Wonderful. A lot of useful advice on self protection .
A. is offered B. are offered C. was offered D. were offered
50.（2019辽宁辽阳）---Your classroom looks so clean and tidy.
---Yes, it _____ every day.
cleaned d cleaned
51.（2019甘肃定西）A baby's first month birthday is a special event in China and _____ with a
special party．
A．Celebrates B．is celebrated C．was celebrated
---It’s me. The photo _____ when I was six years old.
taken
D．will celebrate
52.（2019湖南湘西）---Who’s the little boy in the photo ?
四、完成句子
1.（2019四川达州）A major fire destroyed Notre-- Dame （巴黎圣母院）built in the 12th and
13rd centuries in Paris on April 15th , 2019.（改为被动语态）
Notre-- Dame （巴黎圣母院）built in the 12th and 13rd centuries in Paris ______ ______ by a
major fire on April 15th , 2019. 2.（2019甘肃天水）Lucy’s mother often makes her read English aloud at home.（改为被动语态）
Lucy is often made English aloud at home.
3.（2019甘肃庆阳）罗马不是一天建成的。
Rome _________ _________ in a day.
4.（2019江苏苏州） 如果你每天练习. 你的听力技能将得到提高.
5.（2019江苏淮安）上周杰克当选为班长后，他迫不及待地把这个好消息告诉了他地妈妈。
Last week, after Jack _______ as a monitor, he _________to tell the news to his mother.
6.（2019山东威海）所有的教室昨天都打扫了一遍。
Key:
一、ed ;ed ; ed
二、 planted; required; covered; planted ; shown; used ;
written; be completed; not allowed; asked; be brought
三、1--5DABCD; 6--10DCBCD; 11--15ADBAB; 16--20ADCCB; 21--25DDCCB; 26---30BABAA; 31--35CDCAC; 36---40DCACC; 41---45CBDCC; 46--52DCDAB; BC
四、
destroyed;
read
’t built
you practice every day, your listening skill will be improved.
chosen ; couldn’t wait
the classrooms were cleaned yesterday.
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。
提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should
read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without
going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading
can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future.
Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。
例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and
horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our
knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。
3．今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
一些学生
一些老师
你的观点
观点
赞成拥有
反对拥有
理由
方便与家长联系；
有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；
1. 2.
要求：
1.
表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；`
2.
必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；
3.
词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life
today._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of
economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents
and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at
school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile
phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.
Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and
often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides,
using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers
should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their
studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句型。
【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。
I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。
4． “inspire”
一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以 “The
person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80
词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。
要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？
2. How did he/ she inspire you？
要求： 1.
文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
2.
语言流畅，字迹清楚。
【答案】The person who inspired me
Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired
me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.
Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always
keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my
math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very
hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few
students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as
badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.
You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and
I wish I could be a student as good as he is.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most,
I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He
doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math
exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。
5．回首三年，相信你有满满的回忆。在你将踏上新的旅程之际，请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议，并说说原因，让他们的初中生活更加精彩。
请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activities
My Advice for Junior High
【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter
junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life,
I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly
fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can
join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork,
but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy
your life in the junior high school.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as a student，must be，filled
with，get used to，relax ourselves，two pieces of advice，fall into，join new clubs，take up，not only…but also，make more friends，be helpful to等。而非谓语动词结构To help you get
used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to
enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall
into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and
make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．（2017年浙江绍兴）书面表达。76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager
have a successful life?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。
同学主要观点
努力学习
尊重父母
服务社会
计划未来
……（至少两条）
你的观点
注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life.
They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides,
they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they
think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.
Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful
life.
【解析】
试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect
their parents,尊敬他们的父母；look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is
supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also, we
must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。
考点：材料作文。
7．书面表达
初中的生活美好而短暂。临近中考，压力骤增，父母的唠叨，老师的殷殷期望，自己的学业与梦想……倾诉是一副良方。请给七月的你写一封信，谈谈你身边存在的问题，你打算如何解决，鼓励自己生活还有诗和远方。请根据以下提示写一封给自己的信。
要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Future Me,
It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that …
Your sincerely
【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that I
can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t
ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However,
they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second,
there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.
In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then
making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist
dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲观的). So never give in
to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.
【解析】 【详解】
本文写给未来的自己，目的在于倾诉压力，寻求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and
tests every day.用First, Second点出。第二自然段提到释放压力的方法，应用In order to表目的。用What’s more表递进结构。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress
easily点题呼吁。整篇文章层次分明，结构紧凑。
8．英语中有一句谚语：Failure is the mother of success.生活中我们常常会遭遇失败，但只要能正确对待，往往会获得最后的成功。请就此用英语写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
1．描述亲身经历的一次失败；
2．叙说失败后如何获得成功；
3．谈谈你的感想。
注意：1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes,
"Failure is the mother of success."
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【答案】Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English
saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success."
I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. Before the match, I was cinfident that I
would win. However, I failed . How sad I was! luckily, my r helped me out. He told me
not to lose heart. He also helped me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I
came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled
boy , I beat him!
So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!
【解析】
【详解】
1.
题干解读：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍介绍失败的经历，及从中的收获和感想。描述经历用过去时态。
2.
例文点评：这篇短文条理通畅，能将要点表达完整。句式丰富，能运用连词使文章更有逻辑同时运用了大量的短语。
3.
高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：be full of
，ups and downs，too…to…，help out，before，if，lay against，deal with等。
句型：(1) Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success（2）Failure is
the mother of success.（3）I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.（4）The next
day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! (5) If we can deal with it
well. failure can be the mother of success!
9．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson打算暑假来合肥玩，而合肥的夏天经常持续高温，请你根据以下提示，用英文给他写一封邮件，告诉他防暑降温的方法。
●
清淡饮食； ●
合理休息； ●
适当运动； ● ……
注意: 1.词数80-100；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名和地名；4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Johnson
Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some
advice on how to beat the summer heat.____________________________________________
I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some
advice on how to beat the summer heat.
First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and
vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get
enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What's more, take some exercise
properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please
remember to wear sunglasses and a hat.
I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇关于防暑的建议，所以写作时，比较多地用到表示建议的句型，比如You’d
better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….?
提出建议时要条理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的词。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。写完后记得对文章检查复合，避免单词拼写及语法错误。本篇文章首先第一段对别人的到来表示欢迎，接着对合肥的天气进行总的描述，并引出下文自己的建议。第二段也是文章的主体部分。用first of all, Next, What's more, Finally,提出了四点建议，其中用到建议的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to…..,
Why not…., please…...等。结构清晰，层次分明，词语及句型使用正确，很不错的一篇文章。
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