高考英语改错
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2023年2月12日发(作者：)英语高考短文改错训练
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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删
除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
一、
InChina,peopleandgiantpandashadbeenlivingtogetherforthousandsof
na’pulation
meanmoreforestsarecutfor
habitatinlowlandareashasforcedpandas
tdamagedresultofdevelopmenthasbeen
thatithasdividedthepanda’,
manypandaareisolatedinthesesmallsectionsofforest,becauseoftheywill
ultisthatthegiantpandascan
connectwithoneanothertomateandhavebabies.
Besides,toourrelief,thereisstillsomegoodnewsthatpeoplearetrying
tohelpthegiantpandasbycreatingprotectedareas.
【答案】
【小题1】had--have
【小题2】great--greatly
【小题3】mean--means
【小题4】live前加to
【小题5】damaged--damaging
【小题6】panda--pandas
【小题7】of划掉
【小题8】which---where/inwhich/live后加in
【小题9】can--can’t/cannot
【小题10】Besides--However
二、
Dearmumanddad,
to
ngaboutthejourney,
ult,Isufferfrom“time
lag”.This
issimilarwiththe“jetlag”yougetfromflying,butitseemsthatyoukeep
getting
verynervousanduncertain
r,WangPing,myfriendandguide,wereveryunderstanding
-knownfortheirexpertise,
hisparentscompanytransportedmesafelyintothefutureinatimecapsule.
…
Yours,
LiQiang
【答案】
【小题1】yourself—myself
【小题2】real—really
【小题3】Worrying--Worried
【小题4】去掉a
【小题5】suffer--suffered
【小题6】with--to
【小题7】were--was
【小题8】but--and
【小题9】tablet--tablets
【小题10】parents—parents’
三、
Iamgoodatallthesubjects,andalwaysreadyhelpothers．AtschoolIget
alongwellwithmyclassmates．Therefore,Ihaveaproblemthattroublesmyself
allthetime．It’stherelationshipamongmydeskmateandme．Heisa
hard-workingstudent,whokeepsschoolrulewell．Buthe’sapersonwithfew
words．What’smore,hegotangryeasily．Idon’tknowwhattodealwith
him．Maybethat’swhywe’veseldomsatdowntoexchangeourfeelingsand
thoughts．Ivalueourfriendship．Ihopewecanknowmoreaboutwitheachother
andunderstandeachotherbetter．Idohopewewillbeclosetoeachotherthan
before.
【答案】
【小题1】加上to
【小题2】Therefore--However
【小题3】myself--me
【小题4】among--between
【小题5】rule--rules
【小题6】got--gets
【小题7】what--how
【小题8】why--because
【小题9】去掉with
【小题10】close--closer
四、
aitedabustocome
atastop.30minutespast,dandannoyed,Idecided
htif
Ihadwaitedforonemoreminute,setotake
anextbus,endoIrealize
mpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehave
neverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthe
experiences.
【答案】
【小题1】去掉a
【小题2】minute----minutes
【小题3】and--but
【小题4】with---on
【小题5】when---than
【小题6】waited前面加had
【小题7】other--another
【小题8】do--did
【小题9】possible---possibly
【小题10】lose---losing
五、
Onecoldeveningduringtheholidayseason,alittleboyaboutsixorseven
tlechildhasnoshoes
womanpassesbysawthelittleboyand
kthechildbythehand
heboughthersomenewshoesandacomplete
lkedbackoutsideintothestreet,sothewoman
tleboylooked
ledandrepliedthatshewasjustone
ofHischild.
【答案】
【小题1】去掉the
【小题2】has--had
【小题3】passes--passing
【小题4】her---him
【小题5】warm---warmly
【小题6】so---and
【小题7】come---go
【小题8】looked后面加at
【小题9】how---if/whether
【小题10】child---children
六、
Goodmorning,veyourattention,please
ntovisitthecountrysidehas
llintroducetheirplanfor
l
’llgotoanexhibitionofsomenewinvention.
’ll
setoutat8:everythingnecessarywithyouandpleasegetonthe
welcometoaskmeunlessyoustillhaveanyquestions.
Thankyouforlistening.
【答案】
【小题1】加上be
【小题2】加上of
【小题3】their--our
【小题4】would--will
【小题5】去掉on
【小题6】A--The
【小题7】invention--inventions
【小题8】interested--interesting
【小题9】Taking--Take
【小题10】unless--if
七、
enotfarfromherschool,butshealways
acoldandwindymorning,MissJoneswalkedtotheschool,andthecoldwind
iceandwarmhereandMissJones
washappily,butthenasmallboylookedatherforafewseconds,toputhis
armsaroundherandsaidkind.\"Don\'tcry,isn\'tverybad.\"
【答案】
【小题1】加上a
【小题2】but--and
【小题3】was--were
【小题4】In--On
【小题5】goes--went
【小题6】tear--tears
【小题7】going--went
【小题8】happily--happy
【小题9】去掉to
【小题10】kind--kindly
八、
waitingmyorderto
come,
andgoovertohistableandasked
edandsaid,“Thankyou.
Youaregenerously.I’dlikeanyorangejuice,please.”WhenIwasgetting
readytoleave,Iwalkedbytheoldman’ked
meagainandtoldmeIhadmadehisdays,comingoverandhelpinghimout.I
gavehimahugandtoldhimhehadmademyday,either.
【答案】
【小题1】waiting后面加for
【小题2】the改为an
【小题3】and改为but/except
【小题4】go改为went
【小题5】去掉if后面的that
【小题6】generously改为generous
【小题7】any改为some
【小题8】saying改为say
【小题9】days改为day
【小题10】either改为too
九、
Iwasworkinginabeercompany,helpedthepresidentdosomethingimportant.
Atthesametime,d
ired,
’twanttobotherthepresidentwith
mytrouble,
ore,
dmefromacrossher
largedesk,lookedatmeandsaid,“Alice,Ihearyourmotherisveryill.”
gentlesaidasentence
Iwillneverforget:“Whateveryouneed.”
【答案】
【小题1】helped---helping
【小题2】thecancer
【小题3】drive–drove
【小题4】tired---tiring
【小题5】that---what
【小题6】someone---anyone
【小题7】Therefore---However
【小题8】her---his
【小题9】tear---tears
【小题10】gentle---gently
十、
LinQiaozhiwasaspecialistinwomen’edinageneration
thatgirl’seducationwassecondtoboy’ardworkanddetermination
dehersuccesslateronwasthe
sstoryafter
storyofhowshe,tiringafteraday’swork,wentlateatnighttodeliver
saidtohavedevoted
herwholelifetoherpatientsandsafedeliveredabout50,ed
thatshehadbeenbusywithherchoosingcareer,intravelingabroadtostudy
aswellaswritebooksandarticlesShealsowroteabookintendedforwoman
atlyshewas!
【答案】
【小题1】that--when
【小题2】which--that
【小题3】is--was
【小题4】tiring--tired
【小题5】去掉for
【小题6】safe--safely
【小题7】choosing--chosen
【小题8】write--writing
【小题9】woman--women
【小题10】greatly--great
十一、
ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepmovedbywhatIsawoutside
Iwaitedfor
abustocomeatastop.30minutehadpassed,ndannoyed,
oonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.
IthoughtifIwaitedforonemoreminute,
chosentotakethenextbus,Iwouldhavehadtowaitforother30minutes.
mpatientwillpossiblewastetheeffort
neverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthink
ofthisexperience.
【答案】
【小题1】去掉a
【小题2】minute----minutes
【小题3】and--but
【小题4】with---on
【小题5】when---than
【小题6】waited前面加had
【小题7】other--another
【小题8】do--did
【小题9】possible---possibly
【小题10】lose---losing
十二、
Mydreamschoolstartsat8:dsat3:avethree
’tneedtodosomany
ore,
example,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehour
everyday.
reallkindsoftheflowersand
treesaroundtheclassroom,ieonthegrassforarest,or
arenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.
【答案】
【小题1】have--are
【小题2】didn’t—don’t
【小题3】many--much
【小题4】去掉an
【小题5】hour--hours
【小题6】look--looks
【小题7】去掉the
【小题8】sat--sit
【小题9】加上to
【小题10】helpfully--helpful
十三、
We’llneverforgetadaywhenmyclassmatesandIpaidavisitachemistry
argeonewithnearly20,slikeagarden
butwesawcolorfulflowers,visitedsomeworkshop
ayhomewefeltverytiring,butweboththought
lyhopedwhatwecouldgetmorechancesoflearn
aboutsociety.
【答案】
【小题1】athe
【小题2】visit后加to
【小题3】butand
【小题4】workshopworkshops
【小题5】去掉of
【小题6】fartherfurther
【小题7】tiringtired
【小题8】bothall
【小题9】去掉what或改为that
【小题10】learnlearning
十四、
SeniorThreestudentwillfacethequestionaftertheypassbythecollege
entranceexamination.“ShouldIchooseagoodmajorandagooduniversity”
Somestudentsprefertoconsidermajorsfirstsothattheycanlearnwhatthey
alsomakeitpossiblyforthemtotaketheirfavorite
r,thosewhothinkdifferentlybelievesthatthe
environmentisimportanttoone’sobelievethatstudents
graduatefromleadinguniversitiesareoftenmorelikelytofindgoodjobs.
Inmyopinion,abestchoiceistochooseagoodmajoratagooduniversity.
Butifwecouldn’tobtainboth,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor,
becausenomatterwherewestudy,theycanstillachievealotinacertain
fieldifwetryourbest.
【答案】
【小题1】student→students
【小题2】去掉by
【小题3】and→or
【小题4】在interested后加in
【小题5】impossibly→possible
【小题6】believes→believe
【小题7】graduate→graduating或graduate前加who
【小题8】a→the
【小题9】can→can\'t或后加not
【小题10】they→we
十五、
nday,
theclassthatIwasonheldaget-together,whichtookusalongtimeprepare.
Itwasindeednoteasytogetintouchwitheverybodyandsetaproperlytime
njoyedapreciousdaygreatly,rememberthetimewespent
ndedusoftheinterestingstoriesandthepeopletheywere
pitywhichsomeofuswerenotpresentastheyhadgone
toabroadforfurtherstudies,buttheycalledbackorsentgreetingcardfrom
differentplaces
【答案】
【小题1】graduate→graduated
【小题2】on→in
【小题3】time后加to
【小题4】properly→proper
【小题5】a→the
【小题6】remember→remembering
【小题7】they→we
【小题8】which→that
【小题9】去掉abroad前面的to
【小题10】card→cards
十六、
otoMarylandtovisit
now,isither,
shewillhavetogotoherclasses,butwewillhavelotsoffreetimetogether
gotohighschooltogether,shedidn’tstudyverymuchhard.
Shewasn’sheisaverygoodstudentin
haveagreat
timetogetherthissummer.
【答案】
【小题1】wonderfully--wonderful
【小题2】friends→friend
【小题3】am→was
【小题4】either→too
【小题5】go→went
【小题6】去掉much
【小题7】and→but
【小题8】American→America
【小题9】know→knows
【小题10】success→succeed
十七、
I’manseniorhighschoolstudent.I’mupsetthesedaysbecausemyparents.
oreportmytestresultsto
goodgrades,
ifnot,theywillbeworryingaboutme,wanttolet
themdown,ryboredwithitand
don’nowknowledgesis
ore,Ican’tstandtheyarealwaysmakingme
yexpecttheycanunderstandme.
【答案】
【小题1】an→a
【小题2】because后加of
【小题3】on--to
【小题4】worrying—worried
【小题5】them—her
【小题6】was—am
【小题7】how--what
【小题8】knowledges—knowledge
【小题9】Therefore–However
【小题10】tostudy去掉to
十八、
tunforgettableoneforme
isthespeechcompetitionholdinglastyear.I’
myEnglishteachertoldmethatIhadchosentotakepartinthespeech
competition,terminedtowinthefirst
chnervouswhenIstoodonthestagethatIforgoteverything.
y，Idoagood
eardIgotthefirstprize，myheartwasfilledinjoyandtears
hthisspeechcompetition，Iunderstandthatitisconfident
thatmakespeoplesuccessfully.
【答案】
【小题1】experience→experiences
【小题2】holding→held
【小题3】been∧chosen
【小题4】me→myself
【小题5】such→so
【小题6】a去掉
【小题7】do→did
【小题8】in→with
【小题9】confident→confidence
【小题10】successfully→successful/succeed
十九、
Thewinterholidayiscoming,eenlookingforward
atrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveral
nderful
timeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!However,myparentsthinkdifferent.
Theydon’eafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,
fallenoffatree,,theyareafraidIwilllose
orefreedom,
Iwilltrytopersuadethem.
【答案】
【小题1】made改为makes；
【小题2】at改为to；
【小题3】movie改为movies
【小题4】去掉the；
【小题5】How改为What；
【小题6】different改为differently
【小题7】加to；
【小题8】fallen改为fall；
【小题9】Beside改为Besides；
【小题10】keeping改为kept；
二十、
WiththegrowingpopularityoftheInternet,moreandmorechildrenareaddicted
harmnotonlytotheirhealth,
especialtheireyes,butalsototheirstudies.
Comparingwithonlinegames,manytraditionalgames,likehide-and-seek,
reeverpopulartoseveral
generations,whichnotonlylearnedsomethingvaluablebutalsohadfunplaying
ore,thegamesaredyingawaynow.
Personally,Ithinkteachersandparentsshouldtakemeasuretolimittheir
children\'ldrentoknowtheharmofonlinegamesand
ildrenjudgehealthyandunhealthy
\'smore,weshouldoftenorganizeeventsforchildreninwhich
traditionalgamesplayed.
【答案】
【小题1】把playonline改成playingonline
【小题2】把especial改成especially
【小题3】把Comparingwith改成Comparedwith
【小题4】把benefitskids改成benefitkids
【小题5】把popularto改成popularwith
【小题6】把whichnot改成whonot
【小题7】把Therefore改成However
【小题8】把measure改成measures
【小题9】Letchildrento去掉to
【小题10】gamesplayed改为gamesareplayed