
书面表达(发言稿)
天津新高考英语应用文写作创设了接近现实生活的交际语境,明确了交际场合与参与人的身份,注重在真实的任务和情景中考查考生的语言表达能力。
最近两年天津高考英语应用文写作以书信和电子邮件类为主,以发言稿和短文投稿为辅,既体现了天津新高考的稳定性,又展现出了考查主题新的变化。发言稿是参加会议者为了在会议或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想、工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。
题型 | 体裁 | 话题 | 分值 | |
2020.05 | 应用文 | 发言稿 | 如何利用网络学习英语 | 25 |
2020.07 | 应用文 | |||
2021.03 | 应用文 | |||
2021.06 | 应用文 | |||
发言稿的写作,一定注意以下几个要点,才能写出高分作文。
发言稿的格式一般由三部分构成:
1. 称呼。顶格书写,常用的称呼有Dear Mr./Mrs./、Dear Sir/Madam、Ladies and gentlemen等。
2. 正文。
3. 结束语。常用“Thank you for listening!”。
发言稿的写作要注意以下三点:
1. 明确演讲的对象很重要,针对不同的听众,发言的内容不同;
2. 发言稿中的观点要明确;
3. 发言稿的语言要通俗易懂、层次清晰、逻辑性强。
[审题谋篇]
第一步:审题立意。应用文体裁中的发言稿。在谋篇布局方面常用三段式结构,也就是开头语、正文和结束语三部分。另外,根据所给的提示信息可以看出,本文的时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,人称则以第一和第二人称为主。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语。
第四步:确定较为高级的句子,如定语从句、倒装句和强调句等。
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。
1. 表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2. 表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but
3. 表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing
4. 表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,给阅卷人留下一个好的第一印象。
Passage 1(2020•天津5月卷•第61题)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿:
1. 介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)
2. 简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法
3. 请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
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Thank you.
【参考范文】
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
【语篇分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇关于如何利用网络学习英语的发言稿。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)
(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法
(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
resource; be related to; in real-time; native speaker; instance messaging; video calling; online forum; a great way; identify; wrong information; share。
第三步:连词成句
There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.
The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners.
I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information.
I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。范文句式复杂,如:the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.这句话既运用了现在分词做方式状语,又使用了which引导的非限定性定语从句; learning English online is really a great way for English learners.使用了动名词做主语;But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right使用了部分否定。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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