初三中考英语复习讲座：写作篇
初三中考英语复习讲座：写作篇
优秀水平标准
1. 能准确运用词汇和句型结构，较生动和详细地描述情境或叙述所给话题，能准确自如地表达态度和感情。
2. 能用流畅的语言组织常见体裁的短文，逻辑清楚，结构完整，层次清晰，内容充实，问题恰当。
3. 能在写作中恰当地引用资料，能用谚语、俗语等，能清楚地阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点，具有一定的人文意识。
内容分（7分）
是否紧扣主题，是否涉及到所要求的几个方面
学会审题（写人物，写事件，写物件，写场所，写感想）
03 年 To be a lovely Shanghainese (做一个可爱的上海人)
04年 Leaving school (毕业时分)
05年 Growing pains and gains (成长的烦恼与快乐)
06年 I have a dream (我有一个梦想)
07年 Things I hate to do (我不喜欢……)
08年 Love around me (我身边的爱)
09年 I want to do something for my school (我想为学校做点事)
10年 I am proud of myself (我为自己感到骄傲)
Chinglish
1. I want to buy a present for every taught me teacher.
2. School’s cleaning is everyone’s face. So our face must be cleaned every day.
3. I is very confidence I can eat five chicken everyday.
4. Sometime the playground are pieces of paper. Some students look like no see.
5. I want to clean the fans， the fans are tall， but I’m not short， so it’s easily.
常见错误
1. 句型单一
2. 东拉西扯
3. 时态错误
4. 用词不当
5. 结构松散
6. 脱离主题
7. 字迹潦草
怎样改进写作
1. 学习写作的步骤和方法
2. 学会套题的技巧和思路
3. 用好题目的提示和问题
4. 使用点睛之句和习语谚语
5. 3+1的综合写作模式
套题的技巧和思路
Water
Water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. Fix any leaky tap and tak
e a shorter shower. Don’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute， the more we’ll have for tomorrow.
Things I hate to do 我不喜欢…… (07中考作文)
Suggestions：
1. What are the things you hate to do？
2. What do you hate doing most？ Why？ (Give at least two reasons)
You can begin like this ：
Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However， there are still things I hate doing， such as …
Things I hate to do
Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However， there are still things I hate doing， s
uch as littering or jay-walking. And something I hate doing most is to waste water because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. Fix any leaky tap and take a shorter shower. Don’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute， the more we’ll have for tomorrow.
Something most I’d like to do 我最想做…… （杨浦区08学年初三期中考作文）
Suggestions：
1. What is the thing that you’d most like to do？
2. Why would you like to do it most？ (give at least two reasons)
Something most I’d like to do is to save and protect water resources， because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and riv
ers. So we mustn’t waste the water resources. We should fix any leaky tap and take a shorter shower. And we also can’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute， the more we’ll have for tomorrow.
An Unforgettable Thing 一件难忘的事 （杨浦区07学年初三期中考作文）
Suggestions：
1. When and where did it happen？
2. Why do you think it unforgettable？
You can begin like this
Everybody has something forgettable. For me … was such a story.
Everybody has something forgettable. For me， an English lesson about water resources was such a story. Last Friday we had an English lesson. From the lesson I knew that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t liv
e without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. After class we all promised to save and protect water resources. The lesson is so important that I’ll remember it forever.
On my way to school 上学路上 （杨浦区07学年模拟考作文）
Suggestions：
1. I saw … on my way to school.
2. a fire hydrant (消防龙头) was leaking
3. call the firemen
4. ask … to fix the leaky hydrant
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